Short Poem.

[RELOAD]

I yearn to play
With their pitiful minds
Burn the soles which the seek to find
Crush them all like trolls.

I crave to take hold
Of this pathetic world
Smash it like a brick
Bring traffic to a halt.

Assault the world
Like the days of old
Lighter in my stash
Chaos in a flash.

Fuck them all
False duck squawkin?
Running amok
Havoc on the clock.
With Minnie mouse sucking on a cock.

-Reload.

[Mr.V]

That's nice. Just don't really like the last part, it's like "a quick finish",
if you put a little more work into that, it's a master piece.

Keep writing. :beerchug:

[REL0AD]

Oi oi mate, cheers.

I forgot all about this till I saw ya comment posted... I'm gonna save it and might work on it a little. Thanks mate. :joint:

EDIT: Welcome to rorta.

[cohcoh]

haha nice little poem.

i have one ill put here instead of starting a new thread cos its short.

roll roll roll your joint twist down the end, take a puff thats enough passit to a friend.

:rocketwho

[thief]

EDIT: Welcome to rorta.

That should be welcome back....
yeah its not bad RELOAD... bit of a poet eh

[Paranoid Ecstasy]

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Here's a little poem I wrote 1 or 2 years ago.

Sometimes I question if I'm real.

Gaze into my past and the pain I can feel.

Black and white dreams, lucid as me.

The blotter dissolves and I start to see.

I enter the realm of nothing but swirls.

I climb the rainbow and start diving for pearls.

I can do anything, be anything I want.

The past horrors fade, they'll no longer haunt.

My eyes are closed, but now I can see.

The world is nothing, there is no reality.

I start to come back so some shrooms I eat.

My mind tastes the music and becomes the beat.

The white rabbits start laughing and hopping

I want to join them so the bars I start popping.

My brain soothes out and I start to fade

The world of pain is suddenly out-weighed.

The nothingness is amazing, this feeling is great.

They rush me to the hospital but it's to late.

My mind has overcome this life and into a new.

A life of freedom and swirling goo.

I am no longer with you, for now I'm free.

Start taking the blotters and join my reality.

[torcher]

That should be welcome back....

thief he posted that over 2 years ago.
still a good poem though

[thief]

Ah yeah... didn't see that. hahaha Blond moment.

[iceniner]

Protip: rhymed couplets make the best writing look like doggerel.